IMPULSE CREEK
Deep in a gulch in the heart of Appalachia lies the tiny community of
Magreb. Like most mountain hamlets, isolation breeds stories, and
Magreb is no exception. With deep, tangled roots, such stories go
back for generations. Starting out as the telling of simple
happenings in the area, over time the more interesting ones were
reshaped and embellished. No matter how many versions of the same
tale existed, each was, to the teller, the honest-to-God truth –
“iv'ry jot and tittle.” To the story teller they aren’t legends
as much as events of time past-- as true today as the day they
happened.
For Mageb, the central character for lots of these “events” is
Impulse Creek, a creek flowing down the mountain, traveling by the
village on its way to the Reasey River. Normally docile and even
pretty, every so often a rush of water plummets down the creek.
Folks can hear the rumble coming from upstream. It can be mistaken
for thunder unless your ears are tuned for it. Before you know it, a
torrent causes this gentle brook to rise up in anger. Children
playing in the creek, people fishing, women washing clothes, they all
scurry away up to safety. After a few minutes, the torrent peters out
and the creek returns to its normal self. There seemed no rhyme or
reason to when the creek might “git angry,” as folks say but
that’s the way it’s been for as far back as folks can recall.
Reuben Stookey enjoyed walking up and down the creek and through the
woods. Tall and gangly, he was strong, but more bone than muscle.
Reuben had, as they all said, been “whipped with the ugly stick.”
Even though he was a bit odd and a bit reclusive, he still dreamed of
getting the attention of one of the girls in the area. He knew his
looks wouldn’t attract anyone, at least anyone he might consider.
He had no talents to speak of. To get the girls to notice him, he’d
perform daredevil stunts. When he’d sense that Impulse Creek was
about to erupt, he’d grab an innertube and run up the ridge. He’d
jump right into the deluge on the tube and race down while waving his
cap. The girls only laughed. “One of these days,” the kept
thinking to himself, “one of those girls is not going to laugh.
She’s going to smile at me. I’ll be her hero.”
Rumor spread that Lucy Britton and her husband Caleb were expecting a
visitor. Miss Lucy’s niece was coming from Radford, Virginia. Her
name was also Lucy – Lucy Britten. Britten with an “e” and not
an “o.” She had been named for her aunt as Miss Lucy and Caleb
never had children and Lucy’s sister wanted her to have a namesake.
This was Lucy Britten’s first visit to Magreb.
For weeks prior prior to the niece’s visit, Miss Lucy and Caleb
cleaned and repaired their cabin. Caleb was quite ill, but did what
he could. Miss Lucy bore the brunt of the effort.
The day the niece was to arrive, the weather took a nasty turn. Cold,
hard, heavy rain fell. The wind whipped the trees until branches
broke. It seemed like the worst of winter in the peak of spring. A
bus deposited Lucy Britten on the side of the highway. A rough
hand-drawn sign, not one made by prisoners in the penitentiary, said
“Magreb.” There was an arrow pointing down toward a dirt and
gravel road with a steep incline.
Oh yes, this event first took place during the Great Depression.
Folks in Magreb saw no difference between those times and any others.
Nature created moments of little and moments of more, but never
moments of much. All people seemed to do – the outsiders anyway –
was take. Folks were used to stooping.
Clad in a heavy raincoat with a hood, but wearing city shoes –
pumps deemed sensible for paved sidewalks but of no use on a muddy,
rocky road with a steep incline – Lucy lugged her suitcase down and
down further. A branch hit her in the face and she lost her footing.
Even in the cold and rain, Reuben never failed to take his daily
walks. He was walking up “Magreb Incline” as it was called when
he heard a yell. “Damn!” It was a woman’s voice, and genteel.
The word “Damn” coming from such a voice startled Reuben more
than the yell itself. He ran up the road and saw Lucy leaning against
a tree. Rain was pelting her and she was caked in mud.
Reuben could see beyond the mud and the heavy raincoat and hood.
There was a pretty woman there. He saw a pretty face behind the mud
and water. He determined a pretty figure was hidden under the bulky
raincoat. Shiny hair glistened under the hood. With all the mud,
water and bulky clothes, she was the prettiest woman Reuben had ever
seen.
“Can I help you, Miss?”
“I’m sure you CAN, sir. The proper expression is ‘May’ or
“Might’ I help you, Miss.”
“Excuse me, Miss. Gentility and all the proper grammar don’t
count for much ‘round here. If you can’t skin a rabbit or a
squirrel, you’re not much use – girl or boy.” Reuben backed up
and gave Lucy a courtly bow. “Might I help you, miss?”
A smile broke through Lucy’s mud-caked face.This was the smile
Reuben had been looking for, dreaming about, for years. He gently
helped her to her feet. Taking her suitcase in one hand, he offered
to let Lucy place her arm in his as he guided her down to Magreb.
Once at the Britton’s house, Reuben left her on the porch with her
suitcase and vanished before Miss Lucy or Caleb – more likely Miss
Lucy – could open the door.
All the folks in Magreb were curious to meet Miss Lucy’s niece,
especially the menfolk. The men were divided as to how she’d look.
On one side were the men who thought she’d probably be as homely as
a week old piece of apple pie left out in the sun and rain. On the
other were the men who saw a movie star -- all the way from Radford,
Virginia! -- come to town. The women also wanted to size her up and
were planning a welcoming party to see if she put on airs or not.
Miss Lucy had insisted no fuss be made but finally agreed to one
“fuss.” The rain, cold, and wind lasted for several more days
beyond Lucy’s arrival. All the cleaning and repairing that needed
to happen in town put the end to any plans for a “fuss.” The
niece stayed inside all the time.
When the weather improved, all the men came by the Britton house to
see if they could help Caleb. Of course, their real intent was to get
a gaze at the niece. Miss Lucy kept her namesake under wraps.
Reuben
didn’t stop by. He did his gazing from afar. Once, he thought he
might have seen younger Lucy looking out a window, but her view of
the outside was a mere glance.
After a week of being pent up, younger Lucy ventured out. She went
down to Impulse Creek and found a flat rock to sit on while soaking
up some sun and embracing nature. Reuben was taking one of his many
daily walks when he spotted her.
“Might I sit here?”
Lucy recognized the voice. “Yes, you may.” She pointed to another
rock about six feet away. “Thank you for helping me the other day.
That was very gentlemanly.”
“T’weren’t nothin’, ma’am. Don’t pay it no nevermind.”
Lucy knew exactly what Reuben was up to. She laughed, not at him but
with him.
Reuben loved the way younger Lucy shaped her words. She was precise
and correct but also warm and wistful. She didn’t put on airs, as
the women thought she might.
“I can’t tell you how nice it is to get out of that cabin. I love my
aunt and uncle and it’s great seeing them, but cabin fever is cabin
fever, even if you’re with folks you love.”
“I know what you’re saying. I get out and walk every day, not matter the weather. If I hadn’t done that the other day, you might have been left out in the cold and rain to suffer for hours, perhaps even days.” He didn’t mention that he lived by himself as his parents had died years earlier.
They laughed again.
“I think I could have managed. I’ve been in rainstorms before.
But I still appreciate your kindness.”
“LOO-SEE!” The unmistakable voice of Miss Lucy rang out. Her
voice was as sharp and piercing as the younger Lucy’s was soft and
gentle. Reuben would never forget the first word her heard her speak.
It was that strong but genteel, “Damn!”
“LOO-SEE!”
“I know she sees me. After all, I can look up and see her.”
“She sees me, too. But she’s pretending not to see either one
of us.”
“Goodbye ...”
“Reuben. Reuben Stookey” He bowed his head as she walked up to her aunt’s house.
Reuben wondered what sort of talking to Miss Lucy gave her niece but
also plotted to see her again. The next day, he hid behind some rocks
near where the younger Lucy had been sitting, hoping she’d return.
She did. As she once more soaked up the morning sun, listened
to the birds chirp and insects buzz, and watched the water flowing
down Impulse Creek, she heard something.
“Might I say, you’re looking lovely today?”
Lucy kept staring ahead, knowing full well where the voice was coming
from. “You’ve already said it. And I won’t demand a
retraction.”
Once a day, for over two weeks, the younger Lucy and Reuben met this
way. They had no idea if Miss Lucy knew of their get togethers. They
talked for a spell, meaning as long as they could before hearing the
cry, “LOO-SEE!” They’d stay for the second cry but never
tempted a third.
Reuben talked with Lucy about how beautiful she was and how he
couldn’t understand how she could spend time with such an ugly, gawky
man as he. She referred to him as her “Abe,” after Abraham
Lincoln, and as her hero. He’d bring her flowers he’d picked,
which she’d tell her aunt Lucy she’d picked. He even whittled
what he called a “love whistle” for her. “Just play that
whistle and know I love you.” The sound of the whistle was soft and
strong. It reminded Reuben of younger Lucy’s voice.
“I want to walk in the creek, Reuben.”
“I don’t know, Lucy. We all go barefoot around here a lot and our
feet are toughened up. I reckon your feet are soft and might not
tolerate the stones.”
“I’ve been practicing.” Younger Lucy removed her shoes and
showed Reuben the callouses she was beginning to develop. This woman
amazed Reuben more and more every day.
She moved off the rock and waded into the creek. Reuben watched her
for a few minutes. She grimaced every now and then. Her city feet
were not callused enough for creek walking. He didn’t dare join her
for fear Miss Lucy would see them. After a few days, younger Lucy
motioned for Reuben to join her. She even pretended to fall so that
her “hero” could come to her rescue. He knew all along she needed
no hero and no one to rescue her.
“Let’s go downstream a bit,” she said. “I want to examine the
cliffs on each side of the stream down there.” Reuben finally broke
down and joined younger Lucy. He also kept half an eye out for Miss
Lucy swooping down with a broom or a shotgun. Reuben hoped younger
Lucy was as hungry for some privacy as he was. She led the way as
they walked further and further downstream.
As the water of Impulse Creek washed over their feet and lower legs,
Reuben and Lucy simply held hands. He wanted to kiss her but knew it
better to wait.
He turned toward her and said, “Lucy?”
“Yes, Reuben.”
“We’ve only known each other a couple of months and I don’t
know much about city girls thoughts on ...”
Lucy bowed her head before looking up at Reuben. “First of all,
Radford is not a city. It’s a town. It’s a nice town. I’m a
small town girl. I’m thirty and never had a boy friend. I guess I’m
pretty, but, well, my Aunt Lucy was pretty. She still is. She’s
had a hard life and it shows on her. My Uncle Caleb was a handsome
man. He had his pick. He chose my aunt. He never let her forget it. I
don’t know what I’m going on and on about. I love you, Reuben.
And it has nothing to do with how you look.”
He was still reluctant kiss her. At thirty, he’d never kissed a
girl. One girl kissed him and then laughed at him afterwards. He
picked up her hand and rubbed it gently. “Might you consider
marrying me?”
Do you mean, “Will I consider marrying you?”
“I was just going for “might.”
They were both so caught up in their private world they failed to
hear the rumble coming from upstream. They didn’t even notice the
gradual increase in the rush of water at their feet and on their
legs. Reuben noticed it first. The mighty torrent or Impulse Creek
was heading toward them. hey grabbed hold of each other and tried to
make it to a bank where they could clamber out, but the water was
getting too high and intense. Still clinging to each other, the mad
rush of water knocked them over. A broken branch hit them and younger
Lucy was hit so hard she fell away from Reuben. He swam after her.
She blew the whistle he’d given her that she’d placed on the end
of a leather necklace. A final surge and she was gone from his sight.
True to its nature, the creek settled down as quickly as it had
exploded. Reuben walked downstream and saw younger Lucy. Her head was
bloody from having hit a rock outcropping. Her body was limp. He
crouched down and held her. All he could cry out was, “Your hero
failed you” and “Why, why, why?”
A group of townsfolk soon made it down to where Reuben and younger
Lucy were. Even some of the girls who’d laughed and poked fun at
Reuben were sobbing. A couple of the men managed to coax him away
from Lucy. As they picked up her body to return her to the bank of
Impulse Creek, Reuben cried out. “No! I need to carry her. I need
to!”
At that moment, a splash could be heard coming from up the creek. Miss Lucy was marching down the creek with her shotgun. “You took away my Lucy. You no good-for-nothing so and so. Damn you!”
A
good Christian woman, Reuben had never heard the word “Damn” come
from Miss Lucy’s lips. It was not the soft, strong “Damn!”
younger Lucy had cried out on the road those months ago. It was a
hard, angry, bitter cry.
With swollen, reddened eyes, Reuben stood up and faced Miss Lucy. “I know. I know. I’m so sorry. You’re right. Damn me! Damn me to Hell!”
Miss Lucy looked straight into those troubled eyes. She threw her
shotgun into the creek and gave Reuben a huge hug. They cried
together for a spell. A spell, of course, can be ten minutes or ten
hours. At times such as this, there is no time, and there was no
“LOO-SEE!” to break it. They walked back up the creek to the
place where the men had placed younger Lucy and sat down beside her.
Miss Lucy let Reuben sit closer to her and rub her hand, just as he’d
done moments before Impulse Creek let loose.
Still crying, Miss Lucy said, “I seen it all. I seen it all,
Reuben. I watched how Lucy got in the crick. I watched how she waved
for you to come in. I could see your reluctance. You wanted to be a
gentleman for her.” She rubbed her eyes with her wet apron. “I
saw you follow her down stream. I climbed up the bank and saw you
both hemmed in by the cliffs on each side. Like you. I didn’t hear
the rumble coming from upstream. I knew you wanted to kiss her. I
would have if I’d been you. You wanted to be a gentleman. I
couldn’t make it out, but I heard you saying something to her.”
“I asked her if she might consider marrying me.”
“I figured as much. So different from when Caleb proposed. Then,
the waters came. I saw you clinging to each other. I saw the branch
hit my namesake. I saw her carried away from you. I saw you swim
after her. I saw the waters go down. I saw you run downstream. I seen
it all. I always carry my shotgun when I go out. I wasn’t going
after you.” Miss Lucy paused and covered her mouth as she looked at
younger Lucy. Lowering the wet apron from her mouth, she said, “I
was just so broken apart. I had to lash out. Please forgive me, son.”
“I understand, Miss Lucy.” Reuben leaned over and put an arm
around her.
“You know, Reuben. She talked about you back at the house. She
didn’t call you by name but I knew who she was talking about. She
called you “Abe.” A smile formed at the edges of her mouth.
“When she came here to Magreb, she wasn’t happy. She told me
about the nice man who’d helped her, been her companion coming down
the road – a man who disappeared. She got happier and happier and I
sure knew it wasn’t ‘cause of Caleb and me.” She patted
Reuben’s bony hand. “She showed me the whistle you’d made for
her. Well, I found it and then she said she found it on the road
somewhere, just the same as all those flowers she’d picked.
Horsefeathers! That whistle wasn’t much to look at, but I could
hear her play it very softly in her room. It might as well have been
the finest musical instrument ever made. I saw her blow that whistle
while she was struggling in the crick.”
“She was calling for me, and I couldn’t do nothing! I’m sorry,
could do nothing.”
“No, Reuben. She was telling you she loved you.”
Reuben and Miss Lucy looked down at the peaceful but broken face of
younger Lucy, as pretty and warm behind the caked blood and lacerated
skin as it had been when it was caked in mud and grimy water.
“Miss Lucy, you said you seen and heard everything.”
“I know what you’re going to ask, Reuben. She said, ‘Yes, I
...’ She was overcome before she could finish, but I know in my
heart of hearts she said. ‘Yes, I might and I will.’”
Reuben Stookey looked in on Miss Lucy after Caleb died. The more he
was around her, the more of younger Lucy he could see in her. The
girls stopped laughing at him. They’d seen what true love was and
knew it was something they’d probably never have. No longer a
daredevil, Reuben helped others when he could but otherwise stayed to
himself. At times, after Impulse Creek exploded, Reuben would go to
the rocks where he’d first talked to younger Lucy as a “courtier.”
He’d hide himself as he did back then and play the whistle he’d
given her. He wanted it to be buried with her back in Radford. Miss
Lucy kept it out and gave it to him after the funeral. After all,
they were engaged and the whistle stood as their ring of betrothal.
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